My mind is the soundtrack that only the broken ones like. A playlist that is nothing but loud and messy.
Is this push and pull of thoughts that end up stuck together and never seem to be free. Being organized is my mind’s worst flaw.
I have scars that you can’t see. Hurt that I don’t even apprehend. And a brain full of confusion accompanied by dizziness that is consuming my youth.
©Claudia Hernández
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Claudia, continue what you are doing. Will return again. Your work is pretty ambitious. You show good control of themes. Forgive if I sound like a critic, it’s not that, it’s that I like to encourage. But really I wish to return and see where this talent, and need goes.
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Constructive criticism is always welcome, as well as you are welcome to visit my blog anytime! Thanks for your comment)
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Thank you very much
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I can identify a lot with this. Thank you so much for sharing this and showing that I am not alone. Your writing is absolutely amazing!
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Thank you so much for your kind words☺️
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Amazing. well crafted. my favorite lines “My mind is the soundtrack that only the broken ones like. A playlist that is nothing but loud and messy.”
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I’m very glad you liked it!!! Thank you for your lovely comment😊
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Thank you for sharing
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You are amazing and keep writing. It brings out how beautiful you are.
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Thank you😊😊
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🙂 🙂
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My favorite line is “I have scars you can’t see.” So very many of us do. This was wonderful!
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Thank you very much, Laurel!
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You’re so welcome 🙂
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Your talent is wonderful
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Wow. Thank you!!!!
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Increíble blog el que tienes por eso es que más que merecido es la mención que te otorgué 😉 https://labrujulablogblog.wordpress.com/2016/06/02/1000/
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Mil gracias por la mención!! Me has hecho el día😊 Felicitaciones nuevamente por tus 1000 seguidores!
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Sorry your youth is being consumed by dizziness 😦
*follows you on twitter*
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Thank you!!! 😊😊😊
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Insta!
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Reblogged this on Your Mind! Your Thoughts! and commented:
I absolutely love this
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Thank you!!!! I’m glad you loved it☺️
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“Scars that you can’t see” are always the worst ones. Sometimes they heal very slowly, but they do heal.
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They are the worst ones! Oh I really hope they heal eventually😊
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Cuestión de esperar y, al mismo tiempo, tener fé y esperanza. La esperanza es muy importante, como sabes. Un abrazo desde Canadá, tierra de múltiples esperanzas.
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Muy cierto!! Un abrazo desde Perú☺️☺️
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As your mind tugs and my mind pulls, we uncover tapestry that the Demon holds. I would rise but fall again. I would climb and sail no more. Monsters and Beasties tear through us whole. Pieces. Ashes. Dust. We are not. Anymore. But Death comforts us from our fears. Because after dying, we rise like eagles with new years.
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Beautiful thoughts and reflections.Having passion is the essence of being alive. Jalal (Peru is an amazing country)
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Thank you, very much!!! And yes, Peru is amazing☺️☺️
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Claudia, I love your Expression, but just a suggestion, try pushing towards positivity as it has greater magnetic appeal and is constructive! Let me know if I can help!
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Hi Alka! This was written when I was in a really dark place and I believe that writing about it can make some people feel identified & not alone. I am sure though, that I will have more happy moments in my life which I will also use to write positive things😊
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Hi, I completely get that! Hugs!
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☺️hugs!
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This happens with me all the time…and what is even worse is that I can never tell anybody about what my feelings are coz then they’ll start telling me how I’m supposed to be feeling….. 😭
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Oh Sara I wish I didn’t understand your situation but I do. I hope time heals your pain and you find someone who will be there for you to support you and not tell you what you should & shouldn’t feel:)
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Thank u soo much Claudia 💞
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Love the title.
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Glad you do😊
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Hit me hard…really great post
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Thank you😊
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